I grew up in Cincinnati, Ohio and throughout my youth, our fine city would be infiltrated, so to speak, with unsightly visitors. Gypsies would swarm the town, shopping malls, and neighborhoods. They would loiter about, often even able to go unseen without a keen eye looking for them.
They were vagabonds and pick-pockets, always looking for the edge to take advantage of you and fleece you on something (purse, wallet, game tickets) if you weren’t watching your belongings. Some would go to the extreme. If they saw you grilling out in your backyard, they’d walk right in through the open front door and steal the paintings white off your walls. They were almost magicians at taking from you without you ever noticing.
Well we have Automotive Gypsies as well. They are right there, taking from you, and you don’t even see them. You do nothing to prevent it because you are unaware they are taking money away from you.
The Gypsies of the automotive world are these lead-generating website on YOUR Google Page One, singlehandedly stealing your customers right out from under your nose. They live and breathe off of you and your business. They optimize their own sites for your dealership’s name and gather leads that should be yours. They take your business, customers looking for you specifically, and they sell them off to the highest bidder. These Automotive Gypsies are scavengers and will take whatever they can get their hands on.
They litter Google Page One with both organic positioning – based on their optimized content about YOUR dealership or they actually pay through PPC campaigns, leeching right off of you.
Here are some of the top Automotive Gypsies I see:
AutoSite.com
AutoND.com
Autodealerbase.com
Autobodyalliance.com
Autodiscountgroup.com
AutoSales.com
Mystore411.com
Quickr.com
Vast.com
I’m sure there are some others I’ve missed so feel free to share them with the rest of us. They are a dime a dozen and worth less than that.
Some of these are sometimes just microsites to third-party lead providers trying to maliciously get in on YOUR opportunities such as:
Edmunds (everyone who wants to harvest leads buy PPC on dealership names)
Autotropolis – Going after YOUR organic internet shoppers because they are optimizing their site with keywords involving your dealership name and city in an effort to sell your leads right back to you – or your closest competitor.
Some are local directories, using solely PPC/SEM to break in onto your turf, such as:
Autos.aol.com – local directories where they can search for other cars.
Superpages.com.
I strongly urge you to start keeping a close eye on the 10-12 spots that take up your dealership’s Google Page One.
Are they all of your online entities and digital assets that you control or are they Automotive Gypsies, slyly pickpocketing your dealership of its leads right from under your nose?
It is time you claim all the spaces on Google surrounding your own name. Do your best to dominate these sites and move them down the Search Engine Results Pages (SERPs) so you can protect what is rightfully yours. Automotive Gypsies aren’t deadly. They are just dangerous to your bottom line if you let them run wild on the streets of Google.
Keep your eyes open. Do you see them? You may not even noticed they’ve been hanging around you all along. They’re tricky little buggers and the first step to preventing their mischief is by seeing them in the first place.
- Joe Webb, DealerKnows Consulting
Automotive Storytellers
Wednesday, October 6th, 2010So you’ve been assigned the responsibility to write the vehicle comments on behalf of your store. While this may be Internet Sales 101, it is more than apparent that dealers can use a refresher course now and again. As I research dealership after dealership and do comparison studies between my own clients and their competition, I find it disheartening that so many dealers overlook the basics.
It is not that dealerships today don’t recognize the importance of unique vehicle comments on each inventory listing. It is that there is a time investment that some don’t feel willing to give for a basic best practice. Or maybe it is that no one spelled out for them how to write quality vehicle comments in the first place.
While some use the valuable, time-saving technology that auto-generates unique comments on their behalf from the vAutos, VinSolutions, and Homenets of the world, others have to do it the old-fashioned way…. By actually writing it themselves.
Unfortunately, even when dealership staff take it upon themselves to write this ad copy for their inventory, it usually turns out limp. Majority of dealer-written descriptions include the customary smattering of lines such as
Looking for a family sedan?
This vehicle is still under factory warranty.
Just Reduced!
This is a nice one!
CarFax available.
Traction Control. Front wheel drive.
Must ask for Internet Sales Manager if you want Internet price.
As with all pre-owned vehicles normal wear and tear should be expected.
All of our pre-owned vehicles are sold “as-is”.
Now I ask you, are those statements important to some customers? Absolutely, yes. However these exact statements are far too often jam-packed together in the same description. We need to connect with people searching for our inventory on a personal level, not just educate them. There are several keys to writing engaging inventory description. Below, I’ve broken down the more important aspects.
1) Paint a picture. Create a visual by exploring the five senses. Put them in the driver’s seat. “When you sit back comfortably in your…” “As you drive, you won’t hear any engine/road noise…” “Within a second of putting your head inside this sparkling clean…. you will realize that no smoker has ever lit up anywhere near it.” And always remember to write words like “You” and “Your family”.
2) Appeal to their competitiveness. “Your neighbors/coworkers will be envious when you drive home in…” “Your family will flip head over heels…” And then, if you have the ability to research, discuss other awards/recognition the vehicle may have received. For instance, if there is a MotorTrend truck/car of the year in your inventory, make sure you mention it.
3) Descriptive words. Go buy a thesaurus (or go to thesaurus.com). It is NOT a black car with leather interior. It is a jet-black/black onyx/diamond black clearcoat flawless paint exterior filled to the brim with soft buttery tan cream leather throughout. It doesn’t have AC. It has nip-at-your-nose ice cold air conditioning. It doesn’t have am/fm/cd, it has a “crystal clear sound thumping out of its premium sound system.” Get creative. Oversell it. The more fun the better.
4) Only talk options. There is no need to mention the standard features of a vehicle in the unique description. Power, maybe, but most customers researching a vehicle don’t care about intermittent windshield wipers, power steering, rear defrost, vanity mirror, etc. Only talk about what makes the vehicle exceptional. (You’ll never see anything with a sunroof that has hand-crank windows). So only mention things such as chrome alloys like looking in a mirror, sunroof that lets you feel the cool breeze, soft as skin leather, etc…
5) Get Creative. Speak to the Consumer. Call them out. “You cannot miss the opportunity to see this one-of-a-kind, well-cared-for beast of a mud-flinging 4×4 pick-up. And as you can tell, our dealership is the home of hyphenated words.” As I mentioned, HAVE FUN.
Don’t think of it as a chore. Think of it as writing a story, telling a tale, or singing a song. Make it sound different than the rest. Overemphasize. It will help tremendously. Learning how to write the descriptions will make you that much stronger when you have to verbally describe the vehicle to a customer over the phone as well so the benefits of this skill do not just stop at more eyeballs on your merchandised inventory.
From someone with a journalistic background who fashions himself a storyteller, allow me to say that it does take practice and quite a little bit of creativity. So get inventive and try to truly create some unique comments. By including the variables above, you too can be a master of automotive storytelling.
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