We know that social networking is going to Change the World, but dealers are jumping in without any plan of action. You need to understand the medium and Get Ready before you Walk Out In The Rain or you’ll have a Losing Hand. Listening to one of the greatest musicians of all time, Eric Clapton, can give you advice on how to become successful at social media when he sings:
“It’s in the way that you use it,
It comes and it goes.
It’s in the way that you use it,
Boy don’t you know.
And if you lie you will lose it,
Feelings will show.
So don’t ever abuse it.
Don’t let it go.”
As countless dealers create FB (and G+) pages every day, they need to develop a posting and sharing strategy and it MUST be tied in to what you are doing on the ground within the community. There are six primary ways that I see dealers posting on the social sites:
1) C.R.A.P. – an acronym developed by my friend Eric Miltsch where he believes in posting Coupons, Reviews, And Pictures. This also includes service specials and fixed ops discounts.
2) Celebrating your Customers – this is the posting of customer testimonials, pics of happy customers, and milestone purchases/services/mileage images.
3) Celebrating your Employees – this is the posting of reviews, employee biographies, videos, personal accomplishments, and more to endear your staff to your followers.
4) Celebrating your Community – Sharing your involvement in local events, charities, and organizational activities in and around your primary market area. Your goal is to align yourself with important aspects of local goings-on and act as a valuable, participating member of the nearby community.
5) Trivia – Since your social prowess is determined by the amount of engagement you have on the social pages, many dealers post questions asking the opinions or their fans. (ie – ‘What was the best Christmas gift you ever received?’ Or ‘Where is the best place to eat barbecue?’) Any way to get others to comment or elicit a response.
6) Being an Extension of the OEM – This is where dealers share information about the newest models, concept cars, third-party validating reviews, and OEM-style material that helps further the brand, but not so much the dealership.
So you are at a Crossroads. You don’t have to decide right now. Wait until After Midnight. Whichever way you choose, I urge you to listen to some Clapton and recognize that your success will be based on “the way that you use it”.
If you are only utilizing one of the strategies above (which is what most dealers are doing), you need to Reconsider Baby. Instead create a plan to post using ALL of the tactics above. Tell the Truth, you don’t have as many Lay Down Sally’s walking onto your showroom as before so you need to begin reaching them in a contemporary fashion. My guess is that if you look at your most recent posts on FB, with The Shape You’re In, it’ll take Five Long Years to see any reward from your current strategy.
If you aren’t involved in social networking at all, you’ll be Standin’ Around Crying Tears in Heaven and Groaning the Blues without a franchise because these are the places the public is turning for information. Only those that develop a social marketing plan From the Cradle will look Wonderful Tonight. There is a way to be the Cream of the crop while marketing your dealership socially and that is to be a little like Clapton.

Automotive Storytellers
Wednesday, October 6th, 2010So you’ve been assigned the responsibility to write the vehicle comments on behalf of your store. While this may be Internet Sales 101, it is more than apparent that dealers can use a refresher course now and again. As I research dealership after dealership and do comparison studies between my own clients and their competition, I find it disheartening that so many dealers overlook the basics.
It is not that dealerships today don’t recognize the importance of unique vehicle comments on each inventory listing. It is that there is a time investment that some don’t feel willing to give for a basic best practice. Or maybe it is that no one spelled out for them how to write quality vehicle comments in the first place.
While some use the valuable, time-saving technology that auto-generates unique comments on their behalf from the vAutos, VinSolutions, and Homenets of the world, others have to do it the old-fashioned way…. By actually writing it themselves.
Unfortunately, even when dealership staff take it upon themselves to write this ad copy for their inventory, it usually turns out limp. Majority of dealer-written descriptions include the customary smattering of lines such as
Looking for a family sedan?
This vehicle is still under factory warranty.
Just Reduced!
This is a nice one!
CarFax available.
Traction Control. Front wheel drive.
Must ask for Internet Sales Manager if you want Internet price.
As with all pre-owned vehicles normal wear and tear should be expected.
All of our pre-owned vehicles are sold “as-is”.
Now I ask you, are those statements important to some customers? Absolutely, yes. However these exact statements are far too often jam-packed together in the same description. We need to connect with people searching for our inventory on a personal level, not just educate them. There are several keys to writing engaging inventory description. Below, I’ve broken down the more important aspects.
1) Paint a picture. Create a visual by exploring the five senses. Put them in the driver’s seat. “When you sit back comfortably in your…” “As you drive, you won’t hear any engine/road noise…” “Within a second of putting your head inside this sparkling clean…. you will realize that no smoker has ever lit up anywhere near it.” And always remember to write words like “You” and “Your family”.
2) Appeal to their competitiveness. “Your neighbors/coworkers will be envious when you drive home in…” “Your family will flip head over heels…” And then, if you have the ability to research, discuss other awards/recognition the vehicle may have received. For instance, if there is a MotorTrend truck/car of the year in your inventory, make sure you mention it.
3) Descriptive words. Go buy a thesaurus (or go to thesaurus.com). It is NOT a black car with leather interior. It is a jet-black/black onyx/diamond black clearcoat flawless paint exterior filled to the brim with soft buttery tan cream leather throughout. It doesn’t have AC. It has nip-at-your-nose ice cold air conditioning. It doesn’t have am/fm/cd, it has a “crystal clear sound thumping out of its premium sound system.” Get creative. Oversell it. The more fun the better.
4) Only talk options. There is no need to mention the standard features of a vehicle in the unique description. Power, maybe, but most customers researching a vehicle don’t care about intermittent windshield wipers, power steering, rear defrost, vanity mirror, etc. Only talk about what makes the vehicle exceptional. (You’ll never see anything with a sunroof that has hand-crank windows). So only mention things such as chrome alloys like looking in a mirror, sunroof that lets you feel the cool breeze, soft as skin leather, etc…
5) Get Creative. Speak to the Consumer. Call them out. “You cannot miss the opportunity to see this one-of-a-kind, well-cared-for beast of a mud-flinging 4×4 pick-up. And as you can tell, our dealership is the home of hyphenated words.” As I mentioned, HAVE FUN.
Don’t think of it as a chore. Think of it as writing a story, telling a tale, or singing a song. Make it sound different than the rest. Overemphasize. It will help tremendously. Learning how to write the descriptions will make you that much stronger when you have to verbally describe the vehicle to a customer over the phone as well so the benefits of this skill do not just stop at more eyeballs on your merchandised inventory.
From someone with a journalistic background who fashions himself a storyteller, allow me to say that it does take practice and quite a little bit of creativity. So get inventive and try to truly create some unique comments. By including the variables above, you too can be a master of automotive storytelling.
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